Writing in Series

Simon Steiner

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The Taylor Davis series is my second series. I finished the Divided Decade Trilogy last summer. (If you missed it, book one–The Candle Star–is free. See my sidebar for links.) When I was writing book two, I swore I’d never write another series again. That’s because it’s so hard to maintain a high level of creativity into a second book. And in the case of my trilogy, those were only related tales and not an extended story line. This is actually my first true series, and I’m finding it’s even harder to keep the same story going.

A series requires continuity. Readers expect the same great characters with the same strengths, the same weaknesses, the same idiosyncrasies. I’m finding that consistency is the name of the game. How would Ranofur act in this situation? The same as he acted in book one. The “rules” have to stay the same, too. If Swaugs turn to green goo in book one, he better turn to green goo in book two. A need for consistency is true of all books, but in a series there’s more at stake. If you derail, all the books that follow become a train wreck. It’s vital that you keep your characters on track. I’m constantly going back to book one to reread sections. I’m also struggling to know how much back story to put into sequels. Some is necessary, but odds are, if a reader is in book two, he read book one.

At the same time, it’s important to show growth within your main characters. In book one, Taylor begins to realize he’s not the screw-up he always thought he was. He finds courage and fortitude he didn’t know he had. His confidence has to continue to grow in stages, and he has to mature in more ways as well. Does his shyness fade? Does he begin to try new things? Does his skill in an area grow? Does he learn to value a particular virtue? Developing a character over a long haul can be a challenge, but one who remains static will never capture the hearts of an audience like one who learns and grows and changes.

It’s also tough to keep the adventure fresh and original. Taylor Davis and the Flame of Findul contains a lot of cool villains and tons of fun fight scenes. I’m stretching my imagination coming up with new material. What crazy place can I send him next? What new adversary will he meet? How can I keep old adversaries entertaining? What will be his next adventure? The longer the series continues, the tougher it becomes to create new content.

TaylorDavis_FlameOfFindul_coverSequels do, however, allow an author to explore brushed over areas a little more fully. For example, book one contained a cursory look at the families of my two main characters. In book two, I get to introduce family members who haven’t actually made an appearance yet, develop their personalities, and show the dynamics in the relationships. And I get to bring Hellfire back and give him a life.

Perhaps the most challenging thing of all is making sure multiple books all hang on the same thread. I have to tie everything together into one neat package. That means I’m constantly going back to my story arc. Constantly aligning details. Constantly looking for loose strings. And constantly looking for ways to tie four individual stories together. Who was the man Swain killed in book one? Why did he kill him? What does that have to do with book three? Why did Swain, a pirate, contribute to the building of his parents’ church, and where will I answer that? How did Q become so interested in WWI? What’s the significance to the symbol carved on the graves? And most importantly, how is Swain continually striving to meet his main objective, and how is Taylor going to thwart him?

I feel like I have my hands full. I’m learning a ton, stretching even more, but my enthusiasm for the series is sky high. I can hardly wait to work out the details and share Taylor’s next adventure!

 

 

One More Taylor Davis Post

For those of you getting tired of seeing the words “Taylor Davis,” I have just three quick mentions today. First, the mess over at Amazon has finally been resolved. Taylor is once again priced at 3.99. Second, the paperbacks are now available. I guess that’s my biggest news. I better write that again.

Taylor Davis paperbacks are now available!

(And they look GREAT, by the way.) Finally, for those of you not sick to death of hearing about Taylor, I did a sort of funny post over on my other blog discussing why the book is sure to tick off Christians and non-Christians alike.

That’s all from me today. :)

Andy Smithson: Blast of the Dragon’s Fury

Here’s a new indie release I came across this week via Goodreads. It has high reviews, and I saw mention that it’s a clean kids’ read. Thought it was worth sharing.

Andy Smithson: Blast of the Dragon’s Fury

DraftCover_3Synopsis

From the After Life, ten-year-old Andy Smithson’s relatives initiated a curse 500 years ago. Now they no longer agree it should continue and one is willing to sacrifice Andy’s life to end it. Unaware of the disagreement and with no say in the matter, Andy is unexpectedly and magically transported from his home. He finds himself in the Land of Oomaldee, facing mortal danger at every turn as he seeks to find a scale from a rare red dragon, the most ferocious of dragon species, to break the curse and save his life.

L. R. W. Lee’s debut novel, Andy Smithson: Blast of the Dragon’s Fury, is a riveting book filled with visible humor, clever touches, vivid imagery, and unexpected twists and turns, that can’t be put down. 

photo_5aWhere to find it

Meet the author

Hmmm…Here’s a Quandry…

Amazon-LogoOkay, so you all know I entered Taylor Davis and the Flame of Findul in one round of KDP Select for the express purpose of jump starting it with a free promotion. I did a two-day promo over the weekend. The first day was great. The second slumped. I don’t know if that was because it was a second day or because it was a Saturday. Prior to the event, I had bumped the price up to 4.99 just so it looked like a better deal to get it free. On Sunday, I set the price back to 3.99 where it would stay.

Well, yesterday afternoon (Monday) I thought I’d see if the promo was helping paid sales and what do I find? Only one sale recorded. But the list of free giveaways had grown by a score. What!? So I checked out my link. Sure enough, Amazon has set my book to permafree. But why? They’re the only retailer Taylor is available on, as per the KDP Select guidelines, so this couldn’t be a price match. Sure enough, the column with increasing numbers is not “price match” but “free promo.” I don’t have another free day planned till June! Somehow I got a phantom free promo going that I hadn’t planned on.

So now I’m in a quandry. Eventually, I was going to set Taylor to permafree–after I finished another book or two in the series. That would be Septemberish (book 2) or Januaryish (book 3). Do I make a stink and try to get Amazon to get rid of the free price (no guarantee) and risk it never going free again? Or do I wait it out, making no sales on a book I just spent $475 dollars to cover and edit?

*Sigh*

This is all after trying so hard to get Taylor Davis: Episode One–my preview of the first 10,000 words–to go permafree for weeks with no success. I finally swapped it out with another book that had gone free against my will. (Hee, hee, yes, I cheated.)

Ugh, working with Amazon is an eternal headache. If they didn’t sell so many of my books…

 

The Silver Chair (Chronicles of Narnia, book four), by C.S. Lewis, 1953

The Silver ChairThe Silver Chair is my least favorite book in the Narnia series, but that by no means makes it junk. Eustace returns and brings with him a new character, a schoolmate by the name of Jill Pole. Immediately Aslan sets them a task: locate and rescue Prince Rilian, son of King Caspian, who was kidnapped ten years before. And so Jill and Eustace, with the help of a solemn but valiant Marsh-wiggle named Puddleglum, set off for the northern wastes to rescue the prince.

It is this gloomy setting that I don’t care for in the book. The marsh is wide and lonely, the mountains cold, hard, and bleak. And then the trio goes underground to a world of darkness, drabness, and evil. I much prefer the beauty of southern Narnia. But I do think it’s cool that Lewis developed such a varied world. And the adventures are just as exciting as any other the children embark on.

What makes the book especially meaningful, like all the others, is the wealth of double meanings. Like when Jill first arrives in Aslan’s Country and badly wants a drink, but she’s too frightened to pass the great, terrifying Lion lying by the stream:

“Are you not thirsty?” said the Lion.

“I’m dying of thirst,” said Jill.

“Then drink,” said the Lion…

“…I daren’t come and drink,” said Jill.

“Then you will die of thirst,” said the Lion.

“Oh dear!” said Jill, coming another step nearer. “I suppose I must go and look for another stream then.”

“There is no other stream,” said the Lion.

Anyone who has read the Gospel of John will find great significance in these words. And my favorite part is when the children rescue the Prince only to be enchanted by the Witch, who is trying to convince them there is no Overworld, no sun, and no Lion. But the noble Marsh-wiggle combats her with these words:

Suppose we have only dreamed, or made up, all those things—trees and grass and sun and moon and stars and Aslan himself. Suppose we have. Then all I can say is that, in that case, the made-up things seem a good deal more important than the real ones. Suppose this black pit of a kingdom of yours is the only world. Well, it strikes me as a pretty poor one. And that’s a funny thing, when you come to think of it. We’re just babies making up a game, if you’re right. But four babies playing a game can make a play-world that licks your real world hollow. That’s why I’m going to stand by the play world. I’m on Aslan’s side even if there isn’t any Aslan to lead it. I’m going to live as like a Narnian as I can even if there isn’t any Narnia.

Compare that to Saint Paul’s writings about foolishness. Pretty powerful stuff, eh? And it makes a great triumphant moment for our heroes. Along with adventure, great characters, and a world I’ve come to love, it is such depth that places these books high on my list of favorites. The fact that I happen to share Lewis’ faith doesn’t hurt either. But the whole Narnian series is so magically written that it is regarded almost universally as excellent literature. Not many books remain so hugely popular even after sixty years. There’s good reason for that. I highly recommend The Silver Chair. Ages 10+

Indie Life on a Brand New Blog With a Brand New Book!

IndieLifeI’m excited to be joining the ranks of Indie Life this month. As an indie author of two years’ and six books’ experience, I often post about what I’m doing and learning, so joining this feature is no stretch. As I’ve recently moved my website from a WordPress.com site to my own domain, I’m going to use this–my third post–to share a little about the process.

For the last two years, I’ve managed a free blog called Bookworm Blather. It’s been a blast, a dynamic way to interact with other bloggers, children’s lit lovers, and my fan base. I also managed a separate author website on my own domain using the PHP-based program provided. But because I want to spend more time writing and less time managing sites, I chose to combine them into one.

Though I’m familiar with the WordPress format, switching my blog over to my own domain leaves me without some of the support I’m accustomed to on my WordPress.com site. I’m learning about spam protection and plug-ins, and I’m still working out a few kinks. I have been glad for the support of a web-savvy friend, but I’m attempting all but the most technical aspects on my own.

I don’t feel qualified to walk anyone through the process, but I can give my reactions. It’s not as bad as I thought it would be. There are definitely benefits to blogging on a free site. For the non-techie among us, they are fully supported and user friendly. I was perfectly happy with Bookworm Blather. Choosing to create a website using my own domain name was really a matter of vanity. It gives me more control and, I think, a more professional appearance. And I’m back to only one site.

Before I let you go, I also want to announce the release of my brand new novel, Taylor Davis and the Flame of Findul. (Yes, I’ve been swapping over my website, tending final details for a new release, and starting book two of the Taylor Davis series during the month of April.) I’ve been blogging about the new series for a while now over on Bookworm Blather, but the content from that blog all moved here as well. You can find those fun related links below, but first, here’s the blurb and the brand new cover, designed for me by D. Robert Pease of Walking Stick Books. Isn’t it fabulous?! Far better than my clumsy attempt.

TaylorDavis_FlameOfFindul_coverTaylor didn’t want to follow his parents to the Caribbean. When he’s sucked into a world of angels and their supernatural adversaries, he wants the mission assigned to him even less. The Flame of Findul–the sword that guards the Tree of Life–has been allowed to burn out. The only way to avoid worldwide disaster is to relight it in the forge of Findul the Firesmith. Taylor has been chosen for this task. But there is One who stands in his way.

Ever since I read Rick Riordan’s Percy Jackson, I’ve wanted to write a humorous adventure. Flame of Findul is the first of a four-book series. It’s is now premiering on Nook, Kobo, Smashwords, and Kindle at a special .99 price, but soon I’ll be enrolling it for one round of KDP select. (Therefore, it will disappear from those other sites for three months.) So if you need a non-Kindle ebook format, grab one today. The Kindle version will be priced free for two days only–May 10 and 11. Grab up a copy. I’ll be forever grateful if you also help me spread the word on your social media sites and/or leave a short review The paperback will follow by the end of May.

Here are a few fun related posts:

 

Taylor Davis Links!

TaylorDavis_FlameOfFindul_coverIt’s gone live! You can grab up my brand new novel for a special .99 price just because I appreciate you guys. Here’s where to find it:

Grab one up quick, unless you own a Kindle, because I’ll be entering it in Kindle select as soon as I work out some advertising details. That means it will be pulled from all other vendors for three months. But it will be free on Kindle for a short one- or two-day promo.

And check out the AWESOME cake my husband got for my birthday!

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Happy Birthday to Me and an AWESOME Cover Reveal

I turned 40 today. I’ll admit it, because saying I’m 29 for the 11th time sounds even worse. And I got a super present for my birthday. You may recall that I decided to hire out the cover image for Taylor. I got it back last night…just in time for my birthday. And it is breathtaking.

Remember my old one? I loved it at first, but the longer I looked at it, the more I realized I just wasn’t qualified to do it justice.

taylor 1Now check out this amazing cover by D. Robert Pease of Walkingstickbooks.com. He took my idea and…well, you can see for yourself. Amazing! I find myself just staring and staring at it.

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Final edits were finished a few days ago. Now that I have the cover back, I’m ready to publish Taylor today! I’ll be back in a few days when all the links go live.

I published the first episode (first 10,000 words) of Taylor in a “free” preview that hasn’t yet gone free. I could use a little help. If you’re willing, go to the Amazon page, scroll down “Product Details” and click on “tell us about a lower price.” Then drop in this Smashwords link address    http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/301252    and fill in the price to zero. Done! Amazon now has notice. If they get enough of these notices, they tend to listen and price match.

 

 

Taylor Davis—Mount St. Helens

The climax of Taylor Davis and the Flame of Findul takes place within the cone of Mount St. Helens, so I had to learn a bit about the mountain. It’s located in the southwestern corner of Washington state, in the Cascade Range, and it’s absolutely gorgeous. Mount St. Helens is an active volcano that last erupted in 1980. I vaguely remember that hitting the news as a young kid.

st helens map

To make my story work, I needed to become acquainted with the geological features surrounding the mountain and come up with the best way to approach it from sea. Fortunately, the Columbia River runs nearby with a tributary that practically runs over the mountain’s toes. The tributary, the Louis River, is dammed in three spots, forming three linked reservoirs. You can see them in the photo above. With a bit of imagination, this worked out very nicely for my plot.

Mount St. Helens before the 1980 eruption. Beautiful, isn't it?

Mount St. Helens before the 1980 eruption. Beautiful, wasn’t it?

Then I had to get my characters up the mountain. It just so happened that the reservoirs are on the south side of the mountain, not the north side that got blown to bits in the eruption, which made my characters ascent from the water much easier and more practical. In late April/early May, when this scene takes place, the most direct southern path to the peak is still closed, making it an ideal time to send my troops up (as no hikers would get in the way). I had to be aware of normal weather conditions, the trail’s physical condition, distance, and the length of time it might take to hike to the top. After that, my characters descend into the cone, which is strictly prohibited by law. Sorry, National Park Service, they went down anyway. Then my one-page journey to the center of the volcano felt much like an abbreviated version of one I traveled in a Jules Verne book last year.

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The bulge in the north face just prior to the eruption.

It didn’t take long to track down all those details and turn them into written action. But like always, I got caught up in my research and in the story of the volcano’s last eruption. Did you know the mountain had been bulging for four weeks before it exploded? Sometimes at a rate of ten feet per day! Along with all the earthquakes hitting the area and the rumbles coming from the mountain’s belly, everyone knew she was going to blow. But the devastation was more than anyone could have imagined. I’m quoting from Wikipedia here:

Mount St. Helens is most notorious for its catastrophic eruption on May 18, 1980, at 8:32 am PDT, the deadliest and most economically destructive volcanic event in the history of the United States. Fifty-seven people were killed; 250 homes, 47 bridges, 15 miles (24 km) of railways, and 185 miles (298 km) of highway were destroyed. A massive debris avalanche triggered by an earthquake measuring 5.1 on the Richter scale, caused an eruption, reducing the elevation of the mountain’s summit from 9,677 ft (2,950 m) to 8,365 ft (2,550 m) and replacing it with a 1 mile (1.6 km) wide horseshoe-shaped crater. The debris avalanche was up to 0.7 cubic miles (2.9 km3) in volume.

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Destruction in the blast zone.

The northern side of the cone was completely obliterated. The region has since been protected as the Mount Saint Helens National Volcanic Monument and provides a wealth of scientific data. (Interestingly enough, much of what’s been learned blows holes into geological evolutionary theory of millions of years and provides tremendous evidence for a catastrophic Flood.) The volcano remains active, and the way the region has rejuvenated is nothing less than amazing.

Here’s a 6-1/2 minute video on the eruption with some awesome slow motion footage of the blast.

Next week I should be announcing the release of Taylor Davis!

helens after

Beautiful once again.

The Voyage of the Dawn Treader (Chronicles of Narnia, book three), by C.S. Lewis, 1952

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Lewis does a great job creating different adventures within the Narnian series. Of all the installments, books one and two are probably the most alike. After that, characters begin to shift, settings change, and the plots vary widely. In The Voyage of the Dawn Treader, only the two youngest Pevensie children, Lucy and Edmund, make it back to the magical land. They reunite with Prince Caspian and bring with them their reluctant (and beastly) cousin, Eustace. And in this adventure, they embark on a voyage to the Very End of the World in the utter East.

Eustace, in my opinion, becomes the central character in this book, because he is the one who undergoes an astounding change. The others have already been proven worthy of their nobility in adventures past, but Eustace comes in a selfish, spoilt brat. When he wanders off from the others on one of the many islands they visit, he stumbles onto a dying dragon and shelters in its lair.  Then follows the most symbolic event of the book: “Sleeping in a dragon’s hoard with greedy, dragonish thoughts in his heart, he had become a dragon himself.” It is only after Aslan cuts him free of his dragon skin that his personality begins to change for the better. It is something he could not accomplish without divine help.

As in the rest of the series, Christian allegory abounds. In fact, when Lucy and Edmund learn they are not to return to Narnia, they mourn that they will never see Aslan again. He assures them will. “But there I have another name. You must learn to know me by that name. This was the very reason you were brought to Narnia, that by knowing me here for a little while, you will know me better there.” One of my favorite things about the series is digging out these hidden meanings. And I love that these beloved characters pass on lessons of faith to my kids.

Yet the voyage is riveting enough to please any kid. Who wouldn’t want to set of on an old-fashioned sailing ship to explore uncharted waters? The children have all sorts of adventures. They’re sold as slaves, meet invisible adversaries, narrowly escape death in a pool that changes everything to gold. They meet former stars (as in heavenly bodies) in human form and solve a seven-year mystery. And at the very end, valiant Reepicheep, my favorite character, sails over the edge of the world just after they catch a glimpse of Aslan’s country beyond.

Interestingly enough, I liked the movie even better than the book. That doesn’t happen often. The writers stayed very true to the spirit of the book, and while the written version lags just a bit in the final chapters, the movie does not. But on the whole, The Voyage of the Dawn Treader holds its own in the  Narnian series. I highly recommend it.

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